when looking at my induction piece and comparing it to my final piece it is obvious just how much my skills have increased since the beginning of the year.
i have also learned new techniques and how to manipulate images how i want them to be, this means that I do not have to position my work around the image i can position my images around my work.
my magazines have changed over time because i have learned more of the techniques and the conventions meaning i know what needs adding and what doesnt.
Friday, 22 March 2013
evaluation
My media product follows the conventions of the genre I am
covering by, making sure to use the same three main colours throughout the
front cover, contents page and double page spread, by using the same colours
throughout the magazine I have made sure to keep it all looking like it is from
the same magazine, by using all three colours it also makes sure that the
magazine has continuity throughout it. By keeping some of the fonts the same,
the magazine has a flow of continuity throughout it but by changing some of the
fonts it allows the magazine to push across that it is not conventional, and
even though I have not always used the same fonts throughout I have made sure
to have all of the fonts complement each other and I have made sure to have the
fonts relevant to the genre of rock.
Continuity has been followed across by using the same artist
across all of the front cover, double page spread and contents page, by doing
this it shows that the main focus of the magazine is going to be the one on the
front cover. To reemphasise the fact that it is the same artist I have included
the same image edited on the contents page, this draws the reader’s attention
to the image and the page number matches the one on the double page spread,
this creates continuity between the double page spread and the contents page.
I have not followed the conventions by changing the design
of the pages this makes the main image stand out, I have not followed the
conventions conventionally but have instead followed the conventions of metal
hammer and of other magazines in my genre, this is apparent in the contents
page which has a different colour background to the rest of the magazine (being
a grey colour and the rest being black) this makes all of the columns stand out
on the contents page.
Mainly however my magazine follows conventions and looks how most other magazines in my genre look.
Thursday, 21 March 2013
Tuesday, 12 March 2013
Thursday, 28 February 2013
Tuesday, 26 February 2013
Thursday, 21 February 2013
Tuesday, 19 February 2013
Friday, 8 February 2013
Thursday, 7 February 2013
Wednesday, 6 February 2013
Thursday, 31 January 2013
Thursday, 24 January 2013
teacher feedback
After seeing the teachers feedback I have decided to revert back to a previous draft and I'm going to work on it more by creating some more drafts, I will probably change the colour of the background because it does not fit in to my genre. I will also be editing the images to make the either fit in more to the genre or realign the image, I will also be positioning the images better and including more artist images and using plugs to fill the space.
Peer Feedback Isabel
I like your images and the text that you have used. To improve you could Aline the images a bit more.
Feedback - Cristiana Chiumenti
Strengths: There different pictures and the letter from the editor as it's usual in a music magazine. The page numbers and the titles are clear and easy to read for the reader.
Area of improvements: Maybe you can reorganize the sections and make some more, or just move things around a bit, as it looks like there isn't a defined structure in the positions.
Other comments:
The background is really nice!
Area of improvements: Maybe you can reorganize the sections and make some more, or just move things around a bit, as it looks like there isn't a defined structure in the positions.
Other comments:
The background is really nice!
Feedback by Shaun Welsh
Strengths: You have page numbers and a picture of me.
Areas for improvement: grammar on writing, colours.
Comments: as with last time i have to add insult to injury despite not giving feedback on your actual final piece. To begin with, have the competence to post your final contents so i get to comment on the right one. Secondly, despite not being your fault, i have to say the amount of bright colours in a magazine of your genre is not good. If i wanted to see rainbow vomit i would watch a children's T.V program involving bright scenery and ponies.
Areas for improvement: grammar on writing, colours.
Comments: as with last time i have to add insult to injury despite not giving feedback on your actual final piece. To begin with, have the competence to post your final contents so i get to comment on the right one. Secondly, despite not being your fault, i have to say the amount of bright colours in a magazine of your genre is not good. If i wanted to see rainbow vomit i would watch a children's T.V program involving bright scenery and ponies.
Wednesday, 23 January 2013
Tuesday, 22 January 2013
first contents page draft
this is my first contents page draft it is still in its basic form at the minute, i dislike the background because it looks too plain and is not conventional of the genre I am covering , it does however feature in some of my genres magazines and so i may still keep this design,
Wednesday, 9 January 2013
Tuesday, 8 January 2013
my comments
I am going to make sure to change my front cover and add on more text as well as exploring other colours for the masthead.
Peer Feedback
Louise Hudson
Strengths:
Strengths:
- Bright and colourful, really stand out on page
- Range of fonts used show diversity
- Very different drafts show progress and need for improvement
- Some of your drafts are very simplistic at the moment, so maybe you could add some more features to prevent your drafts from looking empty
- I suggest using a medium closeup instead of a mid-shot as Becky said earlier, it looks a alot better and shows a lot more clarity
Blogger Feedback
Claudia Neal: your blog is good beause it represnts the genre of music you are doing and it has all of your work presented on. For your final piece the image links well with the Mast head of 'Nightmare'. The skyline and mast head really stand out because of the capital letters used and the white text. Making it bolder and more eye catching.The text you have used for your Mast head to links well with the genre, the blood style. You could improve by adding headlines of other storys that are going to be in your magazine. Furthermore maybe use a different colour for the Mast head because your background has a lot of red and black, so changing the colour would make it stand out more.
peer feedback: Oliver Wright
Overall I like the blog. I especially like that you have put in the chart of rock songs so that you know which songs to include.
I like the font of your title for your front cover because it matches the genre you have chosen to do. I think that you should put some stories on the front cover because at the minute it all just looks a bit bare. Also Along the skyline where you have put, "Collect two free posters!", I wouldnt have writen collect and just writen, "Two free posters inside!" or something along those lines.
I like the font of your title for your front cover because it matches the genre you have chosen to do. I think that you should put some stories on the front cover because at the minute it all just looks a bit bare. Also Along the skyline where you have put, "Collect two free posters!", I wouldnt have writen collect and just writen, "Two free posters inside!" or something along those lines.
Peer Feedback-Shaun
Name of person giving feedback: Shaun Welsh
Overall assessment of blog: Overall a lot of good work has been put into this. Few Pictures need re-uploading due to Blogger errors but it is nice to see good detailed planning and research. A front cover is missing from the blog in the drafts but still overall is quite good.
Strengths of front cover: The front cover is quite interesting to look at. Good use of font and good to see that conventions are stuck by and are correctly used throughout.
Areas for development: Put up final front cover and add the date and issue number.Bit chaotic with all the blood, it looks like someones organs just exploded over the front cover and nobody bothered to wipe it clean.
Sunday, 6 January 2013
Fourth Draft
This is my fourth draft which is different from the other images because it features a different image to the others. I changed the image to this one because I believe it matches the genre better because the image is darker and the background is also darker and less busy, I also believe that it matches the conventions better because it is a medium close up which is typically seen on a magazines front cover.
I also changed the price of the magazine due to other monthly issues recently increasing their prices I changed mine to fit in with the conventions of the changing market.
the rock and metal top 40 as of until 12 january 2013
| Pos | LW | WKs | Title, Artist, (Label) (source:officialcharts.com) | Links |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 1 | 7 | BACK IN BLACKAC/DC(EPIC) | BuyWatch Video |
| 2 | 22 | 268 | ROCKSTARNICKELBACK(ROADRUNNER) | BuyWatch Video |
| 3 | 3 | 195 | PARADISE CITYGUNS N' ROSES(GEFFEN) | Buy |
| 4 | 2 | 7 | HIGHWAY TO HELLAC/DC(COLUMBIA) | BuyWatch Video |
| 5 | 10 | 289 | IRISGOO GOO DOLLS(WARNER BROS) | Buy |
| 6 | 13 | 210 | DON'T STOP ME NOWQUEEN(ISLAND) | BuyWatch Video |
| 7 | 7 | 213 | BOHEMIAN RHAPSODYQUEEN(ISLAND) | BuyWatch Video |
| 8 | 6 | 132 | KILLING IN THE NAMERAGE AGAINST THE MACHINE(COLUMBIA) | BuyWatch Video |
| 9 | 8 | 210 | SWEET CHILD O' MINEGUNS N' ROSES(GEFFEN) | Buy |
| 10 | 16 | 78 | HERE I GO AGAINWHITESNAKE(EMI) | BuyWatch Video |
| 11 | 5 | 7 | YOU SHOOK ME ALL NIGHT LONGAC/DC(COLUMBIA) | BuyWatch Video |
| 12 | 17 | 210 | LIVIN' ON A PRAYERBON JOVI(MERCURY) | BuyWatch Video |
| 13 | 4 | 7 | THUNDERSTRUCKAC/DC(COLUMBIA) | BuyWatch Video |
| 14 | 9 | 5 | IN THE ENDBLACK VEIL BRIDES(ISLAND) | BuyWatch Video |
| 15 | 40 | 186 | BEST OF YOUFOO FIGHTERS(RCA) | BuyWatch Video |
| 16 | 20 | 123 | WE WILL ROCK YOUQUEEN(ISLAND) | BuyWatch Video |
| 17 | 14 | 231 | BRING ME TO LIFEEVANESCENCE(VIRGIN/WIND UP) | BuyWatch Video |
| 18 | 15 | 248 | NUMBLINKIN PARK(WARNER BROS) | BuyWatch Video |
| 19 | 27 | 210 | STAIRWAY TO HEAVENLED ZEPPELIN(ATLANTIC) | Buy |
| 20 | 24 | 305 | SUPERMASSIVE BLACK HOLEMUSE(HELIUM 3/WARNER BROS) | BuyWatch Video |
| 21 | 18 | 156 | AMERICAN IDIOTGREEN DAY(WARNER BROS) | BuyWatch Video |
| 22 | 12 | 3 | THE WORLD IS UGLYMY CHEMICAL ROMANCE(REPRISE) | Buy |
| 23 | 28 | 260 | WHAT I'VE DONELINKIN PARK(WARNER BROS) | BuyWatch Video |
| 24 | 35 | 190 | FEELING GOODMUSE(A&E) | BuyWatch Video |
| 25 | 23 | 232 | WAKE ME UP WHEN SEPTEMBER ENDSGREEN DAY(REPRISE) | BuyWatch Video |
| 26 | 21 | 9 | CARRY ONAVENGED SEVENFOLD(WARNER BROS) | |
| 27 | 25 | 17 | THE BOYS ARE BACK IN TOWNTHIN LIZZY(MERCURY) | BuyWatch Video |
| 28 | 19 | 7 | WHOLE LOTTA ROSIEAC/DC(COLUMBIA) | Buy |
| 29 | NEW | 38 | I WANT TO BREAK FREEQUEEN(ISLAND) | BuyWatch Video |
| 30 | NEW | 207 | NOTHING ELSE MATTERSMETALLICA(VERTIGO) | BuyWatch Video |
| 31 | 33 | 30 | BURN IT DOWNLINKIN PARK(WARNER BROS) | BuyWatch Video |
| 32 | NEW | 27 | WANTED DEAD OR ALIVEBON JOVI(MERCURY) | BuyWatch Video |
| 33 | 37 | 32 | CAN'T STOPRED HOT CHILI PEPPERS(WARNER BROS) | Buy |
| 34 | NEW | 196 | FREE BIRDLYNYRD SKYNYRD(MCA) | Buy |
| 35 | NEW | 205 | ENTER SANDMANMETALLICA(VERTIGO) | Buy |
| 36 | 34 | 42 | BOULEVARD OF BROKEN DREAMSORIGINAL CAST FT GREEN DAY(REPRISE) | Buy |
| 37 | 39 | 132 | TRIBUTETENACIOUS D(COLUMBIA) | BuyWatch Video |
| 38 | NEW | 67 | PARANOIDBLACK SABBATH(UMC) | Buy |
| 39 | NEW | 212 | MY IMMORTALEVANESCENCE(VIRGIN/WIND UP) | BuyWatch Video |
| 40 | 32 | 11 | RECKLESSYOU ME AT SIX(VIRGIN) | BuyWatch Video |
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