Tuesday, 8 January 2013

Peer Feedback-Shaun



Name of person giving feedback: Shaun Welsh

Overall assessment of blog: Overall a lot of good work has been put into this. Few Pictures need re-uploading due to Blogger errors but it is nice to see good detailed planning and research. A front cover is missing from the blog in the drafts but still overall is quite good.

Strengths of front cover: The front cover is quite interesting to look at. Good use of font and good to see that conventions are stuck by and are correctly used throughout.

Areas for development: Put up final front cover and add the date and issue number.Bit chaotic with all the blood, it looks like someones organs just exploded over the front cover and nobody bothered to wipe it clean.

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