Strengths:
- Bright and colourful, really stand out on page
- Range of fonts used show diversity
- Very different drafts show progress and need for improvement
- Some of your drafts are very simplistic at the moment, so maybe you could add some more features to prevent your drafts from looking empty
- I suggest using a medium closeup instead of a mid-shot as Becky said earlier, it looks a alot better and shows a lot more clarity
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